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I am the founder of the VGEC (Videogame Enthusiasts' Committee). I'm a fan of the videogame companies Namco and Capcom. Other than that, I'm just an average Newgrounder. P.S. I know it's Namco Bandai but correct me and I'll split your head like a melon

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Poem 5.

Posted by albatross412 - May 27th, 2009


My last poem if this goes unnoticed. I won't stop writing it's just that I won't post poems here anymore because nobody would seem to care. Not a place to get my feet off the ground. Here it goes.

"The thought being homebound enticed the girl to no end,

The feeling to the immigrants on-board spread like trend,

Past pains from home, hurtful words from hell,

Must this boat go slower, she couldn't tell,

All those dictators, the fascism, those memories she'll bury,

Yet the boat will not give pace, mustn't tarry,

Eagerly await the liberty's head,

A sure sign to her she wouldn't be dead,

The thought aflutter, she felt like singing,

Singing, singing, singing, singing,

Fluttering the words as coast came to view,

But the obstacle beheld was noticed by few,

Crash through the hull, the puttering stopped,

Singing, singing, singing, singing, sinking, sinking, sinking, sinking,"

By: Nathan Allen


Comments

Looks great. Made me a little moist.

In what way..............oh I get it. (wink wink). Never mind.

let me misinterpret this poem:

Its about an Immigrant child coming from Europe during World War II only to be struck by a German U-boat and drown.

The end.

A very good guess. But the poem's meaning is philosophical. Basically hope no matter how assured can be taken; never think you're out of the clear for anything and prepare for disappointment here or there.

maybe its about a incredibly long dick going inside the girls ass.

oh come on its obvious at the sinking part :D

Yeah...Whatever floats your boat. I mean it's poetry right?